My essay needs better focus. During my meeting with Professor Relihan, we looked over my essay and determined that I had actually left out the hurdle to be overcome. The essay was more of a list of what I had already done rather than what I needed to do, though I personally felt that since I’m technically mid-process, more background was needed. There’s still no central theme.
Of course, instead of editing it at all during spring break, I just played video games, so rewriting this in under 36 hours should be fun, heh. I’ll need to link my motivations better with my backup plan, make a more concrete point, and actually think about the points of conflict along the way: money isn’t the only issue I’ll eventually face, after all. I’ve had to withdraw from Calc II, round four because I am still not performing well enough to pass, and that’s the current major hurdle.
Onward and upward, then! Time to actually get my ADHD brain to focus on a single thing!
-Miriam
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